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what does OUTWEIGH mean in *do the advantages OUTWEIGH the disadvantages*//ielts writing task 2

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Main Ideas and Lessons

  • Meaning of “outweigh” (IELTS Task 2)

    • “Outweigh” asks whether the overall significance/importance of the advantages is greater than the overall significance of the disadvantages.
    • It is not about counting:
      • the number of advantages vs. disadvantages (that would be “outnumber”).
    • So your job is to decide which side matters more, not which side has more items.

  • How many points to write

    • For an “advantages outweigh disadvantages” question, it is 100% correct to write:
      • one advantage and one disadvantage (even if the prompt uses plural).
    • Recommendation:
      • Prefer one main idea per body paragraph to keep your structure clear and development focused.
    • Note:
      • Writing more than one is allowed, but your teacher strongly suggests one to avoid overly long or unfocused paragraphs.

  • Core Writing Methodology (main strategy taught)

    • Use a two-body-paragraph structure:
      1. Each paragraph has a topic sentence:
        • Body 1: disadvantage side you disagree with
        • Body 2: advantage side you agree with
      2. Add explanation + example to support the point.
      3. Include a “why it matters” / significance contrast:
        • Disadvantage paragraph: explain why it is not very significant (often via a solution).
        • Advantage paragraph: explain why it is highly significant, often using the bigger picture (society/country/world impacts).
    • Emphasis:
      • Disadvantage side → provide a solution to make it “overcome/insignificant.”
      • Advantage side → use bigger-picture benefits to show importance.

Detailed Structure / Instructions (As Taught)

1) Understand the Question Wording

  • Interpret:
    • advantages outweigh disadvantages = advantages are more important/significant overall
  • Do not interpret as:
    • advantages “outnumber” disadvantages (wording would be different)

2) Essay Plan (Driverless Cars Example)

Thesis / Opinion

  • Position: advantages outweigh disadvantages

Plan

  • Body Paragraph 1 (Disadvantages side you disagree with)

    • Choose one disadvantage.
    • Explain how it happens.
    • Then explain why it’s not significant (usually via a solution).

  • Body Paragraph 2 (Advantages side you agree with)

    • Choose one advantage.
    • Explain how it works.
    • Then explain why it’s very significant using the bigger picture.

3) Body Paragraph 1 (Disadvantage + Why It’s Insignificant)

Step-by-step

  • State the chosen disadvantage (example):
    • Driverless cars may cause large employment losses
  • Explain the mechanism:
    • Many people make a living by driving (e.g., truckers, bus drivers, delivery couriers).
    • If autonomous cars replace human driving, these workers could become redundant.
    • This could increase unemployment rates.
  • Make the disadvantage insignificant:
    • Offer a solution:
      • Workers can reskill and likely move to another industry/sector.

4) Body Paragraph 2 (Advantage + Why It’s Significant)

Step-by-step

  • State the chosen advantage (example):
    • Driverless cars can help businesses cut costs
  • Explain how:
    • Businesses wouldn’t need to hire drivers to deliver goods/services.
  • Provide an example:
    • UPS has hundreds of thousands of truck drivers and pays large annual salary costs.
    • Replacing drivers with autonomous cars could reduce/eliminate those large payments.
  • Explain why it matters (bigger picture):
    • Lower operating expenses can lead to cheaper and better goods.
    • Savings can be reinvested into improving products.
    • This creates benefits for society and consumers.

5) Intro Paragraph Rewriting Guidance (Paraphrasing)

  • Paraphrase the question by changing vocabulary/phrasing:
    • “cars, buses and trucks” → “vehicles”
    • “driveless” / misspelled form → “autonomous” (autonomous cars)
  • Example reordering:
    • “The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers.”
    • → “Passengers will be the only people inside these vehicles.”
  • Use pronouns to avoid repetition:
    • After mentioning “vehicles,” refer to them as “them.”
  • Include your opinion sentence:
    • Can include both main ideas or mainly the side you agree with.
    • Example opinion:
      • Businesses saving costs using driverless cars, and this advantage far outweighs disadvantages.

6) Conclusion Guidance

  • For the conclusion:
    • State both sides’ main ideas, especially because it’s presented as a “better summary.”
  • Example conclusion:
    • Job losses may occur, but the downside is greatly outweighed by business savings on operating costs.

Additional Examples (To Demonstrate the Method)

  • Young vs. older population scenario
    • Disadvantage: many young people may struggle to get jobs
      • Make it insignificant via: self-employment / reskilling / moving into self-employment
    • Advantage: a larger young population benefits the economy
      • Make it significant via: stronger economy → improved standard of living (bigger picture)

Speakers / Sources Featured

  • Primary speaker/creator:

    • A YouTube presenter (unnamed) who teaches IELTS writing (references “my score explainer” and “my blog,” but no personal name is provided).

  • Referenced company/source (example evidence):

    • UPS (American logistics company)

  • Referenced IELTS book source (context):

    • Cambridge IELTS 16 (driverless cars question context)

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